Meowzy No-Last-Name ([info]meowzy_chan) wrote,
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OOC Concrit Post
F-list, feel free to ignore this. It's my... OOC Concrit Post!


1) This applies to all the RP characters I currently play. If you see me in an RP and think I'm doing something wrong, reply here. Make sure to specify which character you're referring to, and which RP I play them in.
2) When I say concrit, I mean concrit. I'll enable anonymous posting, but flaming will be ignored. I'm looking for tips, here. Not insults.
3) If you want to give compliments or plot something, that's fine too! =3


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Luceti - Yuan
(Anonymous)
2009-03-04 05:04 am UTC (link)
I...I'm really sorry to say this but um...I really think you rushed things with Zoisite. I can see the event tying into it, but even after it was over, with Yuan letting him stay in his house and then letting him sleep in his bed...it seems a little ooc to me. Sorry.

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Re: Luceti - Yuan
[info]meowzy_chan
2009-03-04 06:04 am UTC (link)
Oh wow, real concrit!

First of all, thanks for taking this to my concrit post instead of making an RP!secret. You wouldn't believe how many people do that, when such a thing really only makes things worse.

And I can definitely see where you're coming from with this. For Yuan, who's usually pushing people away to still allow a strange guy to stay in his house would seem weird. But the underlying motive for that one was also that this guy is one of Usagi's enemies. Hence, if he keeps a close eye on Zoisite, he can keep the guy from attacking Usagi. Plus, as mentioned in his private entry, he did want to give this thing a chance because he feels he needs to get over Martel. Especially now that that Summon Spirit is in the village to 'poke his eyes out', somewhat. The bed thing, for now, was a onetime thing because Yuan was sleepy and caugh offguard. That's why Zoisite got his own room, after all.

But, again, thank you for your concrit! And, uh, reading through that entire thread, even. I was amazed someone actually knew about the bed thing. I'll make sure to keep working on it and try to halt the "rushing", as you called it.

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